Kaaos hyökkää Kisleviin

[Clone Trooper]

A keen eyed high elf watched to the white wastelands to the north of Imperial town Kislev. The high Elves were asked to help the humans who had suffered many dark years under the border of Chaos wastelands. The elf was called Meldir, he was the second generation high elf, who was born just after the Aenarions great brave deed. He had seen the treachery of Malekith and the bloody war with the dwarves. The elven warhost arrived to Kislev just few weeks ago and their keen-eyed archers patrolled northern walls watching for an attack from a horde that destroyed other northern towns and villages for couple of weeks now. Volagrad, which was only few hundred miles away from Kislev, was destroyed so utterly, that the smoke was seen in the Empire capital. Then after a moment one of the elven captains shouted: ”Chaos in sight!”. The Czharina Katarina was informed about the attack and she had fled the city. The city was full of Kislev kossars with their sharp axes and bows. A unit of Marienburger swordmen was also in the city, and if the kislevites wouldn't have given them warm bear mantles they would have frozen to death. Elves within their warm, woolen, white capes started to form up in ranks on the wall. Some spearmen waited behind the walls. After a couple of hours even the humans started to see what was coming: Dreaded men in their black and thick full plate mail. Barbaric marauders walking in the freezing snow without any cloth only their thorny flails swinging easily. Red antlered demons of khorne. Perverted beautiful demonettes frolicing naked in the wild. Their exalted chaos hero rode in front of the army. After they were only about five hundred feet away Meldir raised his hand as a mark and the captains shouted in loud elven toned voice ”Tangado chalad!” and the elves readied their bows targeting the mass of demons, men and savages. Before Meldir had the chance to shout the next command dozens of dark violet whips lashed the elves on the wall, the painfully suffering elves died and then Meldir shouted ”Fire!” the hail of arrows struck to the ranks of the chaos forces slaying marauders and demons like hay, but the dreaded warriors of chaos uttered a laughter to the pour strength of elven arrows. Some of the warriors fell when dozen arrows struck in their chest. The Chaos hero shouted something in his language and the mass of chaos flowed towards the walls roaring curses to humans and elves. Suddenly Meldir noticed one of the wizards casting the spells killing his forces. He targeted and shooted an arrow to head of the brayshaman. The creature fell and was battered by the mass. Then he saw the oak ladders putting into position. He shot an arrow right into one of the laddercarrier chaos warrior's visor killing him instantly. An assisting commander ran to Meldir and said in clear elvish: My lord, the men are trying to open the gates. They are under the the demonettes' spell. Then Meldir commanded some of his fellow elven archers to kill as many demonettes as possible. He knew that the elves can't win the chaos warriors in hand to hand, but if the kislevites could easily cut an armoured warrior in half. After some heavy shooting he saw the gigantic ladders rising and he ordered his elves to withdraw from the walls. The kislevites charged into combat, which was fought on the walls.

Tässä pikku tarina englanniksi. Mielipiteitä, korjauksia yms...

[High king Godric]

Iha hyvä, muutama kirjotusvirhe mutta ei se mitään. Kirjota kaikin mokomin jatkoa, miten taistelussa kävi jne. Mutta kuten sanoin, ihan hyvä

[Routamieli]

Urf, näin alkuun voisi mainita kappalejaoista. Ärsyttää lukea tuollaisia vähänkin pidempiä tarinoita, kun kaikki tuntuu olevan yhdessä pötkössä...
Kirjoitusvirheitä ei mitään suurempia näkynyt, muutama pieni juttu vaan osui silmään.